This isn't part of our class, but I was given the suggestion to put it up on this blog (seeing it's a concept piece) to get some good constructive critique. Have fun :)
Love it! Love the feel and everything. I would just add shadows because the characters dont feel grounded. It feels like they are floating. But other than that... great job!
Great style!! Your rendering is really well done- and nice lighting! I feel like your subjects could benefit from being larger in the frame.. If you could, play with the composition; I feel like since it's an action scene, you could tilt the "camera" so there's no horizontal lines in the background. Also, I feel like the gray ground could use a bit of texturing and shading in the foreground area to match the rest of the image. You can still use that foggy effect in the receding areas. :)
Love it! Love the feel and everything. I would just add shadows because the characters dont feel grounded. It feels like they are floating. But other than that... great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat style!! Your rendering is really well done- and nice lighting!
ReplyDeleteI feel like your subjects could benefit from being larger in the frame.. If you could, play with the composition; I feel like since it's an action scene, you could tilt the "camera" so there's no horizontal lines in the background.
Also, I feel like the gray ground could use a bit of texturing and shading in the foreground area to match the rest of the image. You can still use that foggy effect in the receding areas. :)